Rejected MrNine's Staff Application

Discussion in 'Staff Applications' started by SypxnYT, Mar 18, 2020.

  1. SypxnYT

    SypxnYT New Member

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    1) What is your Minecraft username?
    MrNine.
    2) What is your age and timezone (GMT format preferred)?
    I am 14 (15 4th July) GMT.
    3) How long have you played on our servers?
    2 years and maybe longer.
    4) In what ways have you helped people on the server?
    I have helped people with Redstone and world edit on creative of course and on mcatlas, I have shown people the basics including commands and stuff last time I applied I said that I had no experience in mcatlas but I do now. If anyone ever asked for help id come to them, if anyone wanted help building ill come to them etc, just helping people is what I like doing so I think I would become a great
    5) In what ways would you improve the server?
    I would improve the server by making it really safe and comfortable for any audience so people get attracted to the server more.
    I also have a lot of ideas which I will list.
    IDEAS:
    1.Have like different Festive events in the lobby where you can find presents and get cosmetics (look at IDEA 5)
    2. Have /wild in MCATLAS.
    3. Have a command so Players can check their playtime.
    4. Have a leaderboard showing stuff like Current Rank, Playtime, Server name and stuff like that.
    5. Add a cosmetic system in the form of like the player's head or a compass.
    6.An Upgrade on the discord server.
    7.More game modes like factions or normal survival
    8. Add a /ah in AtlasMC
    9. Add a crates area in AtlasMC
    10. Add shop chests in AtlasMC
    Also instead of doing /warn, /ban, /kick, /mute I would try and resolve the issue myself peacefully and if they turn aggressive then I will warn mute or whatever but for the most part, I will try and resolve the issue peacefully by doing stuff like getting their early making sure people don't turn a civil conversation into an aggressive one, I know anyone could stop an argument and I will agree to it but I think I have the smallest chance of getting this job
    I will do everything in my power to make sky block and creative infinite active again.

    6) Do you have any previous experience as staff on any other server?
    I do, but only on small servers hosted by my friends or me.
    7) Why should we choose you over anyone else?
    I am active all the time and can get on nearly every day: Monday-Friday(9 AM-3.10 PM) is when my school day starts and ends, I can get on discord most of the time at school aka breaks or lunches but I can get on for at least an hour every day, days like Saturday and Sunday I can get on longer during the night because I can stay up later I am also great at moderating and trying all the time to make a better environment for the players, I will take up all my time to make a better environment for players that are new or have been here for a long time.

    Thanks for reading, this is my 3rd time applying so I hope i get it this time
    - Chris ;)
     
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  2. k0rnel

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    Hello chris,
    Your application is very nice it has some good points but it needs to be improved:
    1.It has a bit of pell-mell in it

    2.Improve grammatical errors

    3.Please detail some stuff better.

    Overall i hope your application will be accepted.:)
     
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  3. SypxnYT

    SypxnYT New Member

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    Hi what do you mean by Pell- Mell, and I have used Grammarly so there is 0 ways that my grammar is off, can you give examples for 3, thanks
    -Chris
     
  4. k0rnel

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    Oh pell mell is described as "not in a order" like as you see I would've put points instead of commas because it looks pretty weird (this is probably what i meant with grammatical errors I woke up and my brain didn't fully conprehent with my body).
    Also you don't need any examples for 3 since its good. It should be written small and it should only have a date of when you've joined, like 6 months ago or 2 years ago.
     
  5. luca

    luca New Member

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    Lacks sentences and quality lol
     
  6. luca

    luca New Member

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    But other wise good luck
     
  7. PVP_Builder

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    Hey MrNine! We've looked over this application and have decided to reject it. We feel as though you could add a bit more detail overall. Thank you for applying. You may reapply in 2 weeks.
     
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