Rejected Demadunk's Staff Application #3

Discussion in 'Staff Applications' started by Demadunk, Oct 4, 2020.

  1. Ieclen

    Ieclen Frequent Member

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    hi my name is iecl and i love you :)

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    I don't see many problems with spelling, only in the beginning one i isn't capitalized. However, I do see a few problems, I don't really like how the font is sized, to me it makes it look like you are trying to make your apple look longer then it is, this is just a personal opinion you don't have to change it sorry if it offends u
    Try to sound a little less, overly confident? idk how to say it in text
    With your 4th section you seem to over glamourize yourself a little bit, and you seem to be trying to get to the point so I'd recommend sort of toning that aspect down.
    Maybe try making your personality distinct within this section
    I recycle this quote from WizardBard like every other day but I really like how he said it; represent your personality traits within this section, make them bold and clear.

    TL;DR
    idk i just woke up

    Final words
    You are a good candidate! Keep it up, but just remember that your apple isn't it. It's only half of the process. Your in-game appearance does matter too.
    if u need anymore info dm me on discord

    -iecl out
     
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  2. hallucinationman

    hallucinationman Frequent Member

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  3. Demadunk

    Demadunk New Member

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    (aaagh and here I thought I capitalized all my I's this time around)
    Thanks for the critique!
     
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  4. SpacePoseidon

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    I want to have babies with you lady
     
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  5. SprintM

    SprintM New Member

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    you got my pregnant idot
     
  6. Demadunk

    Demadunk New Member

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    Henry stop doing this
     
  7. Collardian

    Collardian Frequent Member

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    Bad.
     
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  8. ILagWithShaders

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    good but I think the ideas are a little unoriginal
    also 4 could be improved
    Considering what may or may not have occurred with you today, I feel that it isnt a good look at all because you say you give people free things, yet you despawned tons of other items just because you could
     
  9. Demadunk

    Demadunk New Member

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    I literally had nothing to do with them, so don't try to drag me into things I don't do.
     
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  10. Malyesa

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    Why have you got different colors and sizes of text??? Why???
     
  11. Demadunk

    Demadunk New Member

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    It makes the staff app a ton more readable. Would you be more comfortable if all the text was one size? As for text color I just think it fits to have red text be for announcing any edits to the first post and blue text to highlight.
     
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  12. ILagWithShaders

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    https://ruinscraft.com/threads/guide-applying-for-staff.22681/
    • Use standard formatting in your application. Do not post it as a Google Docs shared link. Do not use emojis, strange text colours, or etc
     
  13. El_Wise_Owl

    El_Wise_Owl New Member

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    So, I noticed your staff app.
    I would not support you though. Your mega thread that you created about the problems with dogbat was a long formatted document detailing what you thought was wrong but completely unsupported with evidence or even references to evidence that exists already. You accused Bunny_Rabbits and Tramposa of things when you had absolutely no grounds for it.
    You claim that it's not a personal attack on him yet it clearly is.
    You believe it okay to treat all suspected players of being alts badly on the bases that you don't know who is real or not.
    You do not take into account the difficulties of the affected people and why they may behave the way that they do.
    You claim as if you speak for the whole server, but you simply do not.
    You are encouraging the players to take action against dogbat beyond his served punishment too.
    Quite frankly with how negative you are in that report, I would be concerned if you were selected as staff.
     
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  14. Demadunk

    Demadunk New Member

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    I knew you were going to scour the forum for any other activity I had going, but I'll tell you the whole point of the megathread was to get the drama off the discords and try to give staff (who aren't being transparent on this whole ordeal at all) to help solve the whole problem by giving them opportunity to give closure to the problem.

    Also, please sit down with your family and have a talk, if Bunny actually has a form of depression you should not have their treatment be Minecraft alone. It's irresponsible as a person to ignore your family's medical problems if this is the way you've chosen to have them go about it.
     
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  15. ILagWithShaders

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    your opinion is invalid, youre not an adult and are proven to be a fraud
     
  16. hallucinationman

    hallucinationman Frequent Member

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    why would he need your support
     
  17. Hafixion

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    Sorry your opinion is invalid as you are also the type of guy to think that allowing your daughter to willingly play with a known pedophile is ok
     
  18. Emperyia

    Emperyia Frequent Member

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    SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!
     
  19. Emperyia

    Emperyia Frequent Member

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    WE MUST FORM A UNION, WE MUST UNIFY!



    #YE2020
     
  20. LForLeeeeeeX

    LForLeeeeeeX New Member

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    Your opinion not fact man!
     
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